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Post by fanofbalto123 on Tue Jun 17, 2008 1:59 pm

“Jenna, I never thought once this would happen to me. For a second I thought… I thought I loved you, and you loved me back. I never know you were seeing someone else, and to top it all off it’s the brother of my evil nemesis. But who knew lies could destroy our relationship.” These were the words Balto last said to Jenna as he left her life forever.

October 28, 1926

It was the start to a very cold winter, or as Jenna’s owner would use to say the beginning to a freezing summer. Jenna had just woken up and was on her way to Balto’s boat. As she was walked she noticed a very skinny dog whimpering at the side of the street. Jenna decided to help the dog out. As she came closer she saw the fear in the poor dog’s eyes. “Get away, I’m warning you! I’m not afraid to fight!” yelled the male dog.

Jenna came closer to the dog. She could see that his paw was truly wounded. The street dog growled at her as she took her bandana and wrapped it around his paw. “Why are you doing this, you should be like most dogs?”
“Because,” the dog whined as she tightened her bandana around his paw, “ I’m not like most dogs.”
The dog gave a chuckle and stood up. This male husky was black and white, his black colored fur made him look absolutely cuddly and soft. Jenna helped the limping dog to Balto’s boat. It seemed that Balto was out probably out on another errand with Duke.

“So, who exactly are you,” Jenna questioned him. “ Your not from here I take it?”
“Nope, my name is Raphael, I came to this little town of Nome seeking a mate. I had heard rumors that my ex-mate was living here now. But not only did I come here for a second chance. No, I came for a fresh start. I came here from Juneau. I have a brother somewhere here.”
“Oh, who is that?” Jenna asked.
“Steele, a husky named Steele is my brother.” Raphael replied as he took off Jenna’s bandana.
“My stars, Steele is your brother? Is Steele a large black and white husky, wearing a collar? Blue eyes and a really deep voice?” stuttered Jenna.
“Yup, that’s about Steele. Wait a minute how in the world did you know that?” wondered Raphael.

Jenna looked at the creaking wooden floor,” Well, In Nome I would say I’m very well known. Steele was intending on pursuing me. But I was the least interested in seeing him. For me I was very interested in another dog. Actually, he’s half wolf and half dog. He was my own admirer form a far.”
Jenna told Raphael all about Balto and his journey to becoming a hero. She told him how Balto was an outcast and how Steele hated him just because he’s a half wolf,

There was an awkward silence as the two were leaving the boat. “Wow, I never heard the story of my brother like that. He truly was a monster.”
The two kept talking on their way back. Jenna accidentally slipped on the ice and slipped towards Raphael. Raphael and Jenna’s noses were touching and then he kissed her.
Jenna and Raphael said they’re goodbyes and returned to their homes. At exactly eleven o’ clock Jenna heard sound coming out of her window. Who was it she asked herself and who would come by her window so late. She tiptoed her way out of the house just to see Balto sitting down. He approached a very sleepy Jenna with a very beautiful and fragrant flower in his teeth. He smiled and nuzzled Jenna. “Why are you visiting me so late at night?” Jenna yawned as she took Balto’s gift.
“I just wanted to see the love of my life.” A blushing Balto said.

That night Jenna and Balto took a midnight stroll together. The only bad part of the date was that Jenna had seen Raphael and Steele approaching them. Balto noticed Jenna wasn’t paying attention so looked back at the same direction Jenna was looking at. He saw Steele and walked towards him. “What are you doing here Steele?” growled Balto.
“I was in the neighborhood and thought I’d take back what was rightfully mine. That victory was mine Balto!” an angry Steele yelled.
Just then Raphael jumped on Balto’s back and took a gruesome bite into Balto’s skin. Steele just laughed and kept taking his paw and clawing Balto’s face. Balto fought back and bit Raphael’s leg; in return Raphael bit his arm. Steele was really angry since Balto just bit his brother that he bit Balto other arm. Jenna couldn’t do anything she was shocked at what was happening. Raphael realized Jenna was watching and came towards her.

“Get away from me. Why would you do that to my mate! Why Raphael, why?” Sobbed Jenna.
“Don’t you understand, I did this for us so we can be together. Jenna I love you, and Balto was in the way so I had to get rid of him.” Raphael said.
“What you did was cruel. You hurt my only love, what were you planning to do after Balto was out of the picture?” Jenna screamed.
“I WANT YOU TO FORGET ABOUT HIM!” hollered Raphael.

Balto coughed and bled. He turned to Jenna and stood up. Steele looked at Balto and saw the same hatred he had within himself. Balto couldn’t barely walk that he collapsed along the way. “Why would you do this to me. I heard everything. I guess I could never be famous and have a good relationship. What else could I possibly lose.” Balto quietly whispered.
“Jenna, I never thought once this would happen to me. For a second I thought… I thought I loved you, and you loved me back. I never know you were seeing someone else, and to top it all off it’s the brother of my evil nemesis. But who knew lies could destroy our relationship.” These were the words Balto last said to Jenna as he left her life forever.

Jenna collapsed on the floor, crying, wishing she would have never met Raphael or Steele. Steele laughed as Balto limped into the darkness of night. Wickedly Steele said in an undertone, “ You could never lose what you never had.”





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Post by fanofbalto123 on Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:01 pm

It's my first story on this site. So please be nice...OR ELSE. OR ELSE ILL BE VERY SAD!!! pale
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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Tue Jun 17, 2008 2:04 pm

Great story Like to see more Smile

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Post by Saske italian wolfeer on Wed Jun 18, 2008 1:36 am

man! poor Balto and Jenna!!! it's a very good story!!!

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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Thu Jun 19, 2008 1:31 am

All Fan Fics, Fan Art, Fan Images, Fan Music's, Fan video's, and articles, must now be posted in the fan section:

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Post by fanofbalto123 on Thu Jun 19, 2008 12:58 pm

thanks people, it means a lot coming from you guys! Oh, and Baltorocks123 I will do that immediatly!!!
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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Fri Jun 20, 2008 12:25 am

Ok thank you, and i must say... Great fan fic, i was very interested in it. I hope you will make a second (Don't know if you have yet.)

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THANK YOU!!

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Thanks Baltorocks! Means A LOT to me Razz
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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Tue Jun 24, 2008 1:54 am

Well, i know. I mean, my fave author is Dragon Tamer, and his Toby series, but you have must made 1 of the top,.

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Post by fanofbalto123 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 1:55 pm

Baltorocks123 wrote:Well, i know. I mean, my fave author is Dragon Tamer, and his Toby series, but you have must made 1 of the top,.

Thank you very much. I liked Dragon Tamer's Toby series...I only read Toby Part One: Hero Worship and Toby Part Two: Steele's Return. Gosh, I have a lot of catching up to do in the series. study
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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Tue Jun 24, 2008 11:00 pm

He's up too Toby 12... But i have legal rights to the Toby characters... (To use his characters in my fics) As he so very kindly did so... xD

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Post by fanofbalto123 on Fri Jun 27, 2008 10:47 am

Wow...you're one lucky person!!! ^^
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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Mon Jul 21, 2008 12:02 am

I know. Anyway, 2 things:

Like the new style?
ARe you going to create a new fic?

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Post by fanofbalto123 on Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:20 pm

1)Yeah I like the style. IT's seem very futuristic.

2) Everyone's been asking that lately. I usually write stories when an idea hits me. Right now I've been caught with summer projects and stuff. So...maybe I'll write a sequel??? IDK when I finish I'll post it on BaltoChat...this time in the right place^^ Razz


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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:49 pm

Great can not wait to read your next fanfic

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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Mon Jul 21, 2008 11:31 pm

Perfect, and to be honest, I agree, only when idea's hit me do I write them.

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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:43 am

I know what you mean I hope to write a fanfic soon

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Post by fanofbalto123 on Tue Jul 22, 2008 9:33 am

Great, if any of you write a fanfic I'll be sure to read it as well! Smile

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Post by fanofbalto123 on Tue Jul 22, 2008 10:43 am

Oh, for the record I had just finished The Secret She Kept Hidden PART 2. IT's in the 4shared fanloader.

(An idea hit me last night about T.S.S.K.H part 2.)

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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Tue Jul 22, 2008 11:04 am

Yay can not wait to read it Smile

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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Wed Jul 23, 2008 3:29 am

he Secret She Kept Hidden PART 2
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Jenna took her paws and hugged Balto. “Balto…I’m sorry I did this to you. I wasn’t thinking.” She whispered as she let go of him. She moved in closer to him and was about to nuzzle. “…I’m sorry…” Jenna whispered as she quickly nuzzled Balto’s nose. Balto flicked his ear. He looked away and gently pushed Jenna off him. Balto stood up and walked over to the window. “ Jen, somehow I can’t find it in my heart to forgive you. I don’t know why…but I just can’t.”
“BALTO!” Jenna screamed at the top of her lungs. She could only watch as her beloved mate walked away into the darkness. Jenna fell to the soft snow, crying. Raphael walked over to Jenna. He dropped his head on her shoulders. Jenna growled and snapped her powerful jaw in front of him. Steele pulled his brother away from Jenna’s wrath.
She stood up and screamed, “Why Raphael…what did Balto ever do to you!” Raphael tightened his grasp on the snow. He looked into her eyes; they were no longer the cute innocent eyes Raphael had once known. Instead they were filled with hatred and revenge. Raphael boldly fought back. “What do you mean, you and Balto were together. The only way for me to be with you was if I got rid of him!”
Jenna gasped. Steele’s eyes widened as the remark his own brother made. Raphael’s heart was now beating ten fold. He walked over to Jenna and put his paw on her. “Jenna…” Raphael smiled. “I did this because I love you.” She rolled her eyes and shook his paw off her. Jenna slowly backed away. “Raphael you may have loved me…” Jenna froze and looked into his blue eyes. “…But not even once have I ever loved you.”
Meanwhile far off from the drama unfolding in the distance, limped the body of a bruised Balto. His scars told it all. His blood dripped into the snow. Leaving a trail from where he started. He thought to himself, “I can’t go back to the boat, it’s just too far. But just maybe…” Balto turned around to a small house behind him. The house was lit with light from the inside.
Balto limped his body over to the front door. He scratched on the door hoping someone would answer. Just then, like angels ascending on him, the door opened. It was Rosie’s father. “ Oh no, Balto what happened to you.” He asked while he raced to get Balto in the house.
Balto lay near the fireplace as Rosie’s father opened a cabinet. He took out a small box with an x on it. Balto shook his head and realized it was actually a cross. Rosie’s dad opened the box and started the long process to recovering Balto. What Balto failed to know about Rosie’s father was that he was once a hunter for game. He was used to people getting hurt. He’d even know how to treat a cut blindfolded.
For the time being Balto was stay in their house. He was a hero, and any hero shouldn’t die like that. Balto looked at the flames coming off the wood in the fireplace. He looked at its majestic form, he wasn’t used to being that close to fire. He gazed back at Rosie’s father who was bringing a little girl down the stairs with him. It was Rosie! Balto wagged his tail. Rosie rushed over to Balto. She wrapped his delicate head in her arms. Balto licked her cheek, and went unconscious.
Raphael and Steele were distraught at the words that came out of Jenna. Steele growled at Jenna, intending that she be his brother’s mate or else. Out of the blue Raphael jumps in front of his brother. He gives Steele a stern look, and faces Jenna. He took a deep breath, “ Jen, you’re right I can’t force you to love me. You ad Balto obviously had something, and I was a idiot not to see it.” He took Jenna’s bandana that had fallen off earlier, and put it on Jenna.
Jenna stood there as Steele and Raphael took off leaving a bloody battle in the snow. Jenna looked behind her at the trail of blood Balto left behind. Jenna followed the trail eagerly. When she finished she ended up in her house. She went though the kitchen door that was always left open. She staggered in hoping that Balto might be there. She crept through the kitchen and into the living room.
She saw Balto sleeping near the fireplace, blankets covering his whole body. She didn’t want to wake him up, not because she was too weak. No, it was because she was scared. She tiptoed up the stairs into Rosie’s room. Rosie was fast asleep so the chances of waking her were now slim as it was. Jenna curled up into a ball, and waited till’ morning.
The sun’s rays peaked in through the windows. Balto opened one eye. He managed to look at the window, and realize it was morning. Balto slowly stood up and looked at his wounds. His body was wrapped in bandages and loads of pain. He stood up and shook the blanket off him. Balto had noticed that the fire went out, that’s probably why he had tons of blankets on top of him. Just then Balto heard something move and he swiftly turned around.
It was Jenna. She brought a food bowl with her, and she dropped it in front of him. Her warm smile lit Balto’s heart. Balto ate from the bowl. At the same time he was remembering what had gone down last night. He finished and stood up straight. Jenna moved in closer to Balto. He watched her move slowly towards him. Jenna was now at Balto’s side. She stared at Balto’s eyes, while Balto stared back at her.
Jenna took her paws and hugged Balto. “Balto…I’m sorry I did this to you. I wasn’t thinking.” She whispered as she let go of him. She moved in closer to him and was about to nuzzle. “…I’m sorry…” Jenna whispered as she quickly nuzzled Balto’s nose. Balto flicked his ear. He looked away and gently pushed Jenna off him. Balto stood up and walked over to the window. “ Jen, somehow I can’t find it in my heart to forgive you. I don’t know why…but I just can’t.”
Balto and Jenna suddenly heard the door slam open. Raphael walked inside. Balto had remembered that he had attacked him last night. Balto walked in front of him. He stared down his rival. Noticing the resemblance between him and Steele. Everything was silent, that not even a sound from a mouse would be heard. Balto growled at Raphael, “ What are you doing here?”

For member who cant ue 4shared (Like me). I had to copy it onto notepad than onto somthing else (This). But I noticed the same paragragh was poted twice, at the beggining and at the end...

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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:07 am

good new part little confusing at the end but I hope this story continues

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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:20 am

Well, if she wants, I will co-write the next story...

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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Wed Jul 23, 2008 7:56 am

I would ask Im sure she will be ok with that Smile

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Post by Conay_White_Star_Line on Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:03 am

But we'll have to do it via PM's...

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