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Balto and the mysterious building

Post by Firefoxwolffie on Wed May 14, 2008 12:53 pm

One day Balto an Kodi were walking Around when they saw a commotion. They ran over to find out that james johnson a local nome man went into An old building and has not been seen since. (Later that day) Ah come on Dad Don't you want to find out whats? inside the building, No Replied Balto It is dangerous To go snooping around where there could be trouble. Balto went to his ship to lay down But found himself Thinking of the building And Decided Why not go find out whats in side.
Balto Then walked through the sleeping nome And walked to the Building. He saw sign Keep out But he could not help himself and he went in side. When he was in there he saw a newspaper That said Local nome man James johnson missing since December 12 1923. 1923!(balto said) That is an awfully long time.He noticed a small door open and walked inside When he got into the room the door slammed shut. "What the" he realized there was a port hole but when he tried to go to it that shut as well and he felt a sharp pain in his side he panicked and ran toward the door which released him and he ran outside and felt no pain he decided To go home and try to sleep(if only he new he was not well) He got back to the ship and laid down still shaking because the pain that he had felt. He began to fall asleep and dream of nice things he was in nome with his friends enjoying a game then a voice said welcome balto in an Erie voice We have been waiting are you ready to have fun said another voice we are chimed in a third everting began to melt in to scary scenery with dark clouds and dry cracked ground and his friends were no longer on his side but started laughing at him and jenna and steele were saying sorry but we have to go It made him angry sad scared and then the voices started Laughing ahahaahah its fun to mess with your dreams and then he woke up with a yelp and he was shaking again and he had a sharp pain in his side he turned to look and he had a scar shaped like an evil serpent then the pain stopped and he was able to relax or so he thought. He began to dream again only this time he was awakened by boris He said balto wake-up you have been tossing and turning for hours and you have been mumbling things thats when boris noticed the scar whats this Im not sure replied balto then he told boris the story of the night and he said stop worrying you probably ate something funny. balto decided boris is right and started off towards nome to go find jenna. when he got to town and found jenna he told her what happened are you ok? jenna asked ya said balto (jenna noticed his scar) what is that she asked balto said im not sure but it was not there befor i went in the building and after it was there. Kodi walked up Hey dad hey mom hoow are you? fine replied balto but he was not fine. well i have to get back to the mail team see you kodi ran off(later that day) Balto was getting ready to go home and started walking torwards the ship on his way home he passed an allyway and something dark and balck darted behind a trashcan he looked but did not see anything balto said to himself must have been a cat andwalked to the boat tired and once he got there ready to sleep. He laid down and began to dream. this time he was in a meadow with Alue and they were playing then the first voice said welcome back,did you miss us replied the second, we missed you chimed the third everything turned dark again and balto was on the ground while his friends were all standing a round him saying hey wolf dog balto was speechless star chimed in Whats a matter cat got your toung jenna said how could I be with you when i have steele and balto started spinning until yelp! he woke up across the boat from where he started. boris was saying Boychig you were tossing and turning again are you all right Balto said out of breath i think so and laid back down to get more rest or so he thought. he baegan to dream again but nothing strange happend in this dream so when balto woke up he went to find jenna. when he found her she was with kodi,sorry dad i did not want you to get hurt balto said im fine ans said you told him jenna said he had the right to know and balto agreed. Balto said we need to talk and signaled just him and jenna so kodi ran off to be with his friends. balto told her what happend and she was worried but he said he was fine and went on home.(later that day) jenna went to see balto but when she got there he was really sleepy and not very energetic as usual jenn said are you all right balto said im ok just very tired jenna said you should get rest so she nuzzled him and ran home. Balto laid down and drifted of in to a restless sleep. this time he was in nome but there was a carnival And there was lots of commotin He was looking for jenna when all of the sudden the dream changed and he was at the house of mirrors and all he could do was go in. when he got in he saw him self and said never really liked houses full of mirrors when all of sudden he saw an image of steele and whirled around to see him sitting there. Whats Wrong wolf dog scared of your own reflection then the mirrors all showed steele. balto said its just one of you Or so he thought steele said you would think that wouldn't you then they pounced on balto bitting him hard and then balto went for the neck to bite whn he woke up and realized he had boris in his teeth. boris said i want to keep that leg thank you Balto droped him quickley and apologized. it was morning and balto was nervous boris said why not go to the beach to calm your nerves. when he got there it was pleasent the sun was out he was alone until fog blew in and he could just make out a small girl skipping but she never really touched the ground. she was singing in a odd tone Skip skip skip to my lou skip skip skip to my lou skip skip skip to my lue skip to my loe my darling flys in the butter milk shoo fly shoo flys in the butter milk shoo fly shoo flys in the butter milk shoo fly shoo were going to come and get you. the last line caught his attention she said whats wrong wolfie cat got your tounge? balto raced towards town to find jenna and tell her what happened. when he found her she was talking to Ron He has been acting funny and does not seem him self and she explained about the mark balto became frustrated for no reason and went home star walked up and said hey balto, balto turned around and said don't ever do that again Star said sorry just wanted to tell you something but then he ran not wanting to be more trouble. when balto got back to the boat boris said how are you balto said tired and he laid down jenna came up and was carryng in her mouth a balto And said balto you should drink this It should help. balto said well i am thirsty and he went to the baottle but just when he got there unbelivable pain struck him and his voice changed to an erie Get it away and he ran mad in circles and past out. When he woke up jenna lay next to him shaking and said are you alright balto said yes why and she told him what happen balto became worried and said well im going back to sleep.this time he was in nome but he was walking towards a beautiful new apartmen complex painted green and there was a little girl and father come here Spice te girl said to balto SPiCE thought balto im not spice im im Who am I? Balto was drawing a blank but Decided to go to the girl they went in side to the building in to a room that said 2100 and they had furniture evry where(meanwhile) the real balto was sleepwalking and sleptwalked over boris to the building and to 2100 and he walked in side dream balto aka spice was in his room playing with the girl waiting for dinner he walked through the house and found a mirror to his surprise he was a black and grey husky. He thought this is definently different but he was to busy exploring to care. While he was exploring the girl called him and there was two florrs and down stairs was his room th girl showed him all of his toys and said spice don't show dad this room and she pushed a lever and a door flew open opening a secret door then the girl ran up stairs for dinner All of a sudden balto be gan foaming a the mouth he ran up stairs and the man screamed rabies and he was bitten and then he was killed and then the girl was killed in the building back in nome balto was snarling and biting the air and then he dragged the bodies to the secret room and then it closed when he got up staris there was a women thought to be the girls mom and said i have always hated you spice and she got a gun and killed spice. balto woke up hours later stunned to find him self in the building and he raced towards the outside. when he got there was daylight so he looked for jenna He saw her talking to ron again And became furious and he stormed off towards his ship. star came up and and said hi balto balto turned and said do that agin and ill bite your head of star was scared and ran away then balto could not controll himself and He ran to star and was about to kill him when he blacked out. When he woke up he was surrounded by friends and family but there were others around someone else balto said hey guys whats going on and they all looked and said you nearly killed star balto said WHAT? he ran over but they got in his way and said stay back jenna went to balto and said you are worrying me then Balto became mad and vices in his head said kill them kill her And he was going to attack when jenna said whats wrong with you please your scaring me if you do not change i will leave you balto was about to kill her as she said that and then he ame to and it broke his heart he fell to the ground shaking sayin i will do any thing please do not go. then he walked home tired and ready for sleep. he began dreaming he was in the appartment And he was watching as the women knitted her cloths and she ran to the basment with a hat and opened the secret room and she walke dto a skeleton in the wall that was small and said ah suzan its been three long years and i must leave and the skeltn said please do not leave us and the other replied your not going any where and the door shut and she was traped and then he woke up sweating but he was not on his boat he was in room 2100. meanwhile jenna sought out help on how to change balto back And she found a reader a small dog known as madam rita and she told her of balto'stroubles and she told her that a special water might help and to ask ron. she also said go to the building and find out what your up against so jenna did as she was told balto came running just as she got there and fell down at her feet she asked how he was and said ok but tired so he went back to his boat.(few days later) it had been six days and nothing strange had happend balto thought im cured but then he got dizzy and fainted jenna came and said we need to get him to ron so they tuged him to ron and he came out and said it is late Whts going on? she showed him balto and said it is time to fix this but not here some where secluded she told him about the boat and ron said thats perfect so ron got prepared and they all made it to the boat Muk and luk where there and ron said once i start hold him down this could get ugly. So they did as they were told ron siad things and then put water n his scar balto screamed in an erie voice stooop get away kill them and ron continued balto started to become stronger and jenna realized he was not in his on free will somthing was controling him and then ron said once more now and the voice screamed killllll him. Ron did once more touch his scar and then balto fainted and purple smoke come from his mouth and surrounded ron and then 10 seconds Later Ron was dead. balto woke up Hours later totally refreshed and feeling good and saw jenna and said he felt great and things were clear again and was feeling like his old self. so he ran around playing with his friends and then went home to sleep. That night balto had 1 more important dream he was agian in room 2100 and then all of a sudden spice appeared and balto said is this a nightm- Balto was interupeted By spice no im here to tell you that those voics were spirits that were terrible and conrats on how long you delt with them spice said ron was fine and was in a better place and that the real reason james johnson disapered was that his wife shot him and his daughter and then killed her self and that spice died of old age So he said thank you for setting us free and with that was gone and balto woke up feeling great and He was free of any more bad dreams.

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Post by Midnight_12 on Sun May 18, 2008 2:32 pm

Great story! I love your writing! You sure can write a lot. Laughing
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Post by Saske italian wolfeer on Thu Jun 19, 2008 2:40 am

yep!! I love your story too!! you're a great writer Very Happy

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Post by Firefoxwolffie on Thu Jun 19, 2008 6:30 am

Thanks Razz

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