A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
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A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
Once there was a wolf by the name Of Donner.He was a young wolf who had plans to start a pack He was Nice and he was seeking a mate. He was walking one day when he spotted the most gorges Wofress he lay his eyes on. She was silver and gray with a black tail which was quite unique. Donner decided to Howl to her to get her attention. HOOOOOOWl he cried and she looked up and saw a handsome male who was dark grey and he had a black streak down his back. Hello she said sweetly Im Blitzen she said who are you? My name is Donner he said smiling Polietly, you are the most beautiful wolfress I have laid my eyes on he said. Oh my well thank you she said sweetly. I have never seen a more handsome male before she said lovingly. DO you have a mate He asked even though they just met Donner Knew he was in love And wanted to make Blitzen his mate. Why know I am alone wolfress now But I Really Like you we could walk and talk about it she said looking attractive. Sure Donner said sounding eager. So they Began walking so How long have you been on your own?Donner asked blitzen. Well I left my pack when I was one but I have had a hard time since. What about you Donner? she asked him. What is your story? well Im old enough tobe on my own and Im looking to settle down and start my own pack. Im glad I found you he said smiling I never have seen a wolfress as beautiful He said to Blitzen. Thanks she said smiling. So do you have a cave or place to stay he asked her? Well No she said sadley I find small places but then I move on. Well I have a place to stay and Would Love to have you stay he said Blushing. Why thank you Donnar that would be nice she said. So donnar lead her to his cave and showed her around. Oh this is just Lovly thanks again you are nice to a female. So Donnar and Blitzen fell asleep and They slept close together. The next morning they went hunting together and gotto know eachother very well. By the evening Donnar was sure she was the one he wanted to be his mate. Hey Blitzen he asked How would you feel about being my mate? Oh well Sure I would Love to she said smiling she finnaly had a mate and they would have a good life together. months passed and Blitzen had become pregnant and she was happy and so was Donnar. Blitzen my Love how are you? He asked thinking of his pups. Fine my dear ready to be a mom though she said, She was heavy with pups and it was ard for her to do much.One night a week later she had her cubs Three Boys was all andShe loved them all very much. Donnar was Happy too. They decided to name them Xhan, David and Firefoxwolffie but fire for short. They were happy and loved to see there sons grow. As they grew David and xhan ooked like there parents. Fire was very different. He Looked like his parents But he had a streak down his back that made him different. His brothers teased him becasue of it and they were not nice to him at all. His Mom loved Him very much becasue he was unique. His father was not very nice to him though. He was different and did not fit in very well. He was never given first choice of food and he was always not allowed to sleep near his mother. He was told to sleep away from the group. It was hard for fire but He still learned to hunt and fish and he grew much bigger then his siblings. His mother thought He was her favorite but she was not allowed to say that. One day fire was about a year and a half he was told to go and start his own pack. He was becoming a loner and it was very sad for him. He was not allowed in his pack anymore so he left, And Then he saw a gorges she wolf by the name of Sukari. She was so pretty in fires eyes. He was looking forward to meeting her one day and He would soon. TO be continued
Last edited by Firefoxwolffie on Mon Aug 04, 2008 11:30 am; edited 1 time in total
Re: A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
Awww...cute story . It was kind of short though, considering the rules say fanfics have to be 1000 words long. Anyways, on the other hand the story was splendifferous! (i think that's a word)
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Re: A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
Oh its not finished yet but I wanted to post what i had Im still working on it
Re: A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
Ahh, I see! Well than, carry on!
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Re: A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
I tried to read it, bt honestly, I found it extreamily hard... I mean, with no speech marks 'n' all.
Re: A Flame of a tale Fire's Life story
Sorry Again not done totally but Ill add those soon Forgot them LOL
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